Treasure
Shirtless all seasons, towel tucked into his pj’s waistband, leather moccasin-slippers. Poppy lifts me onto the wrought iron stool. I can reach, stir, spoon.
Saturday morning, just we two cook pancakes, green bowl. Black-handled spoon. Chuffs a rhythmic tune mixing egg, milk, flour, batter. Clicks against Corningware. Our ceremony.
“Careful! Skillet handle’s too hot to touch!” Spatula blade smoothes oil. Water-droplets hiss, we smell metal’s heat.
Silver dollar pancakes he calls them. We exhale with batter’s melting spread. We flip these coins. Saturdays, we amass treasure on oven-warmed plates.
Rachael Ikins
Central New York Branch, NY
Editor’s note: I’ve gotten so many great submissions for Flash Fiction October, I’m turning this into Flash Fiction Fall! Please continue, Pen Women, to write and send, if you haven’t contributed yet. Remember: 1 entry per Pen Woman, 100 words or fewer, your name and branch or MAL under your story, and be creative! The best 30 will be included in a chapbook. I have a story that got separated from its email titled Matthew 7:2 without a name–please let me know if it’s yours. The Poem of the Week will return in November. –Treanor Baring
This special treasured time reaches out and captures me instantly in time. It builds up with ease. You reached all of my senses wonderfully. I yearn for more. I like this, Rachael!
POEM? GOOD ONE!
B.W.